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Hey Wereweasel I love your dynamic poses! Two things I notice you can improve is 1: The amount of lines you use, Don't limit the amount of strokes you make but make the lines longer - this will make them even more alive and fluid. We are made out of water and water never go in straight lines! :) 2: another thing is that I notice you don't draw through, what I mean by that is - a good example is your pose upper left, her thigh isnt connected with the leg. You solve this by ghosting in a line going through. Love the bottom right one, it's really thrusting itself forward :3

Hello again,

Nicest job on your range of fluidity of the poses and the dynamics of the more forceful shapes. I think that these poses are much, much, much more solid but fluider, but I feel that these poses still should benefit the most exaggeration of curves opposing straights. Why don't you kindly free up your forces and forceful lines with 32 minutes of 2 minute poses all done with 2-3 lines?

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My hat's off to you and your current and future goals.