Gay - Not good at naming

Very best job on your uber-really detailed picture of two women in a pose composition, Pixel202, but it just doesn't look or seem most forceful enough yet in terms of the LGBTQ+ feeling and humor yet, so how would you like to caricature, exaggerate and distort your lines of rhythm and tempo the most with 30 minutes of 29 second couples poses?

As a result, your duo attitudes will become the least you underplayed but the most overplayed in terms of the intrinsic feelings and motivations from these two. If you wanna know more about what I mean, please do yourself a favor by making 2-3 warm-up scribbles of anything and everything you see of yourself and anyone around you, sorry if it comes out too esoteric but nonsensical. For most info, please pick up a free PDF of the Vilppu Drawing Manual for refs.

Have lots of fun drawing and scribbling,

What two very good friends!

Beautfiul work, you nailed a lot of details, and I love the detail on the second woman's pants. You got a solid sense of anatomy as well. I can tell you spent a long time on this.

I think maybe you could push the shading or contrast a little more. The hands on the ladies inner thigh stand out as kind of overworked. The anatomy for the hands look pretty good, but the darkened shadows on the inside of the fingers make them look smaller and deformed, looking like old lady hands. Next time, try to get the general shadows on the hand before adding tinier details, because the resulting contrast will allow you to put less little details and have them be more effective through the power of suggestion.

Thats just my two cents! Love the work!

Very impressive art work with great shading.
I am a beginner so I don't know, if I may metion a critique point? If enlarged, it seems to me the line from nose to mouth could have a bit modification. Otherwise ve ry vivid!