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I love your style. I can tell you practice very much



A little bit of info would be very useful for critiquing this piece, like how long each of these sketches too and more importantly, what direction you feel you need to work toward.

One thing I think you could push a little more is your shading. The tones are very light and I think you could really bring out the depth of your pieces if you really pushed the values a little bit more.

The positioning of the feet of the figure on the right looks a little unclear. The little lines you used to dictate the toes on the left foot are messing with how I percieve its angle on the floor. If you don't have time to really make the toes work on your piece, I thing a general form is more appropriate, like you did with the karate girls foot on the floor.

Great fold lines on the pants! I need to practice those so bad. It ads such a life to the figures

Nicer job on your martial arts/kung fu poses, Vy, but I can tell you must be practicing daily, yet I'm not getting enough of the more pushed and pulled distance of gestures, yet please ask yourself, like elf said, how long did it take me to do each specific drawing, and equally important, what is the more concrete goal for my drawing in my mind?

The argument why is as a result, it can and shall help yourself chart a more better course for your more future goals and sessions. For most importance, if you push the gestures but distances with the thicker lines more closer to us, yet the thinner lines more farther from us. And so, my hat's off to you.

Very dynamic, your figures hold a sense of weight and gravity and your hatching, shape language and various types of shadows are very impressive. I would reccomend the use of darker pencils and dont be afraid of bold shadows.