Nicest job on your range of action and silhouette in your pose, Naima, very great!
I think your graphic shapes, lines, and positive and negative spaces in your poses, are completely and absolutely on the right track, but I feel that your gestures all seem a bit too stilted to me for a tricky pose like this. Why don't you please loosen up your lines and shapes with 62 minutes of 26 second poses in foreshortening and in the nude?(If you think you're comfortable with that) (3720/26≈143 scribbly shapes drawings)
As a result, if you kindly try out this constructive request, then your difficult poses will become much of a cinch if your think of them in terms of the simplest shapes and lines in terms of gestures and spaces. For most info on your gesture drawings for cartooning difficult attitudes, please pick up a copy of the 2 Walt Stanchfield's Drawn on Kindle.
I think your graphic shapes, lines, and positive and negative spaces in your poses, are completely and absolutely on the right track, but I feel that your gestures all seem a bit too stilted to me for a tricky pose like this. Why don't you please loosen up your lines and shapes with 62 minutes of 26 second poses in foreshortening and in the nude?(If you think you're comfortable with that) (3720/26≈143 scribbly shapes drawings)
As a result, if you kindly try out this constructive request, then your difficult poses will become much of a cinch if your think of them in terms of the simplest shapes and lines in terms of gestures and spaces. For most info on your gesture drawings for cartooning difficult attitudes, please pick up a copy of the 2 Walt Stanchfield's Drawn on Kindle.
My hat's off to you.