by Aunt Herbert, March 24th 2024 © 2024 Aunt Herbert

Your use of value and your shape language is so well done! The drawing perfectly communicates the image of a body. My only critique is one) to bring more midtones into the piece, as it currently only has three values and two) make the torso more proportional to the rest of the body. As of now, the torso is too long in relation to the rest of the body. Great job all around!

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Aunt Herbert

Yepp, torso-lengthening is definitely a beginner's mistake that is still haunting me.

With the values,... I am kind of a big fan to play around with contrast and brightness on the scanning software.... and I think like sometimes I get carried away and overdo it.

Polyvios Animations

I really love your strongest uses of gestures and silhouette so much! They visually well defined the naked body. But, as for one critique, I'm still not getting enough of that wildest line confidence and consistency. Would you like to just go ahead with your next 30 minute class mode of figure studies?

The argument for this little thing is because, your line clarity and directness can and will become the most simplest and sharpest in your lines of action and quickness as they can and will be described in just singular lines. For most details on anatomy and gesture practice, kindly look into a copy of Anatomy For The Artist by Sarah Simblet, with a buncha photographs.

Let's hope you'll find these completely and totally inspiring.

Aunt Herbert

Thank you for the reading tips, as I am currently actually building towards a bit of a drawing library.

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