Critique request on first forays into gesture :)

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  • #40596
    Hello!

    I have been drawing for awhile, but am just getting into gesture because I want to fix how stiff my art is and improve my anatomy.

    I am trying to do a minimum of 6 x90 second gesture drawings daily, plus 1 x5min if I have time.

    Here are my first 3 days of gesture practice: https://imgur.com/a/DrHRUhP

    I have watched a few proko videos, but I would love some feedback of how I can improve!

    My regular art if its useful to see: https://imgur.com/a/TYYQh0i
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    #40597
    Hi!
    Your gestures are already pretty good, and have a lot of movement to them! congrats for that :)
    As for advice, i have two things: maybe try a bigger pencil, or another looser drawing technique. This could add depth to your lines, and help you step away from drawing similar body types. it seems like you already have a pretty clear artstyle, and automatically go back to drawing similar body types. And seconly, looking at it, it seems like you're spending a lot of time on the heads, where for this type of shorter pose a simple circle does the trick. It'll give you more time to work on the rest of the body. :)
    Keep up the good work !
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    #40611
    Thank you! I will give those suggestions a try :)
    #40612
    Try drawing different body types, you seem to stick to one kind of body type. Also try to make your lines look less flat (idk how to explain it more, some of the lines just look very flat to me). Also, on one of the drawings the arms look a bit skinny to me, idk if it was on purpose or not. Otherwise this is good!
    #40613
    Right away a large percentage of your drawings look pretty natural and good! I think one sketch is a little wonky on the proportions of the legs but it looks good!

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