I'm wondering how could I improve hair? While keeping shapes based style.
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Thanks!
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Wiktor
edited this post on December 30, 2024 3:54am.
I think maybe you're getting distracted the texture of the hair! You're doing these straight planes on the face that follow the shadows, so I think the best way to improve this is by doing the same thing for the hair. For example, the shape you've done where the hair meets the forehead? That still follows your technique, and that works well.
Like, yes, that is going to get rid of his hair texture, but if you aren't satisfied by it you can go back in and add small planes for details and texture later, or try to solve it with the way you colour in the shading. But it's the sudden switch from straight to very loose lines that make it not fit in as well with the rest in this particular image.
(I would offer a redline, but since I don't have the reference picture you've used that's a little difficult to do.)
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