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Critique on rendering and anatomy. The books suggest had been useful. Any suggestions for more challenging activities to improve shortcomings, especially foreshortening?

Edit: Fixing some techincal issues. For some reason, the link does not show all of my images in a single post. Not sure if anyone saw all of my drawings.

https://imgur.com/rQDCBzT

https://imgur.com/m6yEsLf

See if this works, this is my first time using Imgur. Sorry of the inconvience. I really appricated the technical help.

https://imgur.com/a/GrAyrAX

I see, I'll fix it as soon as possible.

Alriht, let me relinked. If that dosen't work, I'll used imgur. It did worked twice before, not sure what happend.

https://twitter.com/JO_NI12/status/1787247202295042479



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Working on Clairfying/Story Telling. I added expressions to see if the gesture captures performance. Also, I want to improve my rendering. Any tips and sugesstions? Resources? 10 minutes drawings really helped, should I study longer?

https://twitter.com/JO_NI12/status/1787247202295042479

Thanks for the critique. As for the texts you mentioned, I have already have purchased the books and they have been a wealth of examples and tips. I will do more 10+ minutes of drawings.

I want to work on clarifying/Expressing my gestures. Any suggstions and examples? Also how are my lines, shapes, and forms? What else can I improve on such as story telling?


https://twitter.com/JO_NI12/status/1786284861751443831

Thank for your feedback, very insightful. Any examples of expression the forms of my gestures? Also an another example of "Loose but Tightned" forces and forms? I can do 2 ten minte poses but some examples or books would be appreciated.

Just made an account today. All Critiques are welcomed. (Note: Using Twitter for images only)

https://twitter.com/JO_NI12/status/1785867678764413409