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Thank you, I appreciate the feedback! I'll try to simplify my poses based on the advice you gave and apply some of those strategies to my practice.

Here are some of the one minute drawings I've done:
https://imgur.com/a/DrZWG8x

I feel like I'm not really capturing the movement of the body but more of the outline, plus my linework itself is a little lackluster. I'm not really sure on how to tweak my drawing method to show more rhythm. Any advice? Thank you.