Hello, I like your drawings. The boldness in your shading gives a very dramatic effect. I guess the lack of shading on the forehead makes it look flatter than the sides of the face? I feel like the temples and the part of the forehead near one’s hairline sometimes fall into shadow when facing a model straight on. I think because the slope of the skull and also if the hair is casting shadows on the face. I like how you did the eyes. I struggle to add so much detail to any feature without muddying them but your eyes are very readable if that makes sense? Thank you for posting.
Hello, I’m not sure this counts as a critique, but I find your drawings very energetic and lively. It was especially helpful to see the different colored line of action on your 30 second drawings (even if you like them less) because that made the concept of a line of action much clearer to me. The drawings you spent longer on and therefore built out more are still so dynamic that I could see the movement in each pose more clearly than I have been from the photographs. Thank you for posting!
In some drawings you use line variation and in others you don't. This could be due to the time constraint, I don't know. But your most dynamic looking drawings have that variation, at least in my opinion. I really like your overall style though. The way you simplify things is very effective, and the details you choose to include in your drawings add to the mood of each piece.
