30 min. figures drawing class #001

by Kumotori, March 19th 2021 © 2021 Kumotori
Done as part of a 30 minute class. My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form C&C are gladly welcome! :D
Polyvios Animations
Great job on rendering the gesture and animaiton of the overall proportions of the homosapien form, kumotori. Great job on your shorthand of them.

So, if I can give you a very, totally honest suggestion of feedback, it would be to say, that some of the quick forms of those gestural studies are a bit too rigid for my sensibilities. Why couldn't you please calm yourself down in your hand, with 30 minutes of 30 second quick attitudes???? (1800 seconds/30 seconds a sketch=60 poses in a day) The reason why is because, it could and should be able to free yourself up on caricaturing your shorthand sketches in a comical sort of way.

Streak of luck and cheers.
Kumotori
Thank you so much for you advice! I will definitely try practicing as you tell me. :D
Kungfu Panda
U use messy lines to cover mistakes, in proportions, try some
&t=97s&ab_channel=moderndayjames rly well explained brakedown of form and simplification