Casual studies
© 2018 Will
30 secs
My goal for these is to be able to notice the curvature of the body / improve my gesture drawing ability overall (especially in the connecting joints and torso)
I usually do not request critique but am now willing to give it a shot. :
Nice job on your range of force and motion of your figures. I think they're all completely on the right track to progress, but I feel that they all need a bit more jazz to the forces, so why don't you please lighten up your lines of action with 31 minutes of 29 second loose poses? (1860/29≈64 looser line sketches)
The reason why you would and should do this request, is because you can and will be able to tell the story thru the curvature of the body, but to exaggerate it, therefore to express yourself with this, even with the joints and torso.
Good luck to you from me.