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they look really good !!

the only feed back i have is that all the face shapes look very simmiler as if they are all the same person.

if you are trying to draw a variety of different face shapes i also suggest studying the structure of the face from as many ethniceties and backgrounds as possible.

good luck!!!

The vertical line in the Loomis construction isn't supposed to indicate the eyes themselves, it's the browline, going from the eyebrows to the tip of the ears. More exactly, it isn't even about the brows, but about the upper rim of the eye cavity in the skull. That is a bone structure underneath, so it doesn't change with different expressions.

Also, you should definitely start working at reducing your bundles of lines to single lines, or your draft will be just buried under excess lines that distract from what you want to depict.

They look good but lack depth I'd look into Andrew loomis book heads and hands to help but other then that I think your on the right path