art progress critique

yo can someone critique my art??? i started in june cuz i was very bored at my job and practice whenever i have time. there's a lot i left out in these photos, but these are the ones worth remembering imo.

red building drawings used references and the black castle looking one i freestyled that shi

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QLeBr5EeZ8sIvbHd821m9JAdMuhOckvr/view