Beginner gesture

Just getting started with gesture drawing and I'm still finding my footing, any critiques would be appreciated. These are all between 30 seconds to 10 minutes[img]https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/876a6861-2fa0-444e-895e-b0d9149d5f1e/dd4r35k-0bb013b8-b919-4a53-9ee4-92877a6cf12a.png/v1/fill/w_894,h_894,strp/sketch_1555431891894_by_gibberibberish_dd4r35k-pre.png?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MTAyNCIsInBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzg3NmE2ODYxLTJmYTAtNDQ0ZS04OTVlLWIwZDkxNDlkNWYxZVwvZGQ0cjM1ay0wYmIwMTNiOC1iOTE5LTRhNTMtOWVlNC05Mjg3N2E2Y2YxMmEucG5nIiwid2lkdGgiOiI8PTEwMjQifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6aW1hZ2Uub3BlcmF0aW9ucyJdfQ.P5tBbiEenGrjbIipEJGGKctAJADWPuwGGJmpwXOVHAI[/img]

couple more

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Two minute poses

[img]https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/876a6861-2fa0-444e-895e-b0d9149d5f1e/dd4xxp8-f48f37cc-78e1-4605-a766-1e0b3f8dde71.png/v1/fill/w_800,h_800,q_80,strp/sketch_1555641054307_by_gibberibberish_dd4xxp8-fullview.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9ODAwIiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvODc2YTY4NjEtMmZhMC00NDRlLTg5NWUtYjBkOTE0OWQ1ZjFlXC9kZDR4eHA4LWY0OGYzN2NjLTc4ZTEtNDYwNS1hNzY2LTFlMGIzZjhkZGU3MS5wbmciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9ODAwIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmltYWdlLm9wZXJhdGlvbnMiXX0.wgrOTcqx22-KNmnfIs83KxI-4HmpasUtiO3ZVSqja6Q[/img]

These are good overall! Here are some tips:



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All I'm seeing is a broken image

1 minute drawings

These are a bit stiff as I was aiming for accuracy more than gesture



[img]https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/876a6861-2fa0-444e-895e-b0d9149d5f1e/dd50134-1a83346e-817f-4f0e-a779-fae203b56f4f.png/v1/fill/w_800,h_800,q_80,strp/sketch_1555706235063_by_gibberibberish_dd50134-fullview.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9ODAwIiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvODc2YTY4NjEtMmZhMC00NDRlLTg5NWUtYjBkOTE0OWQ1ZjFlXC9kZDUwMTM0LTFhODMzNDZlLTgxN2YtNGYwZS1hNzc5LWZhZTIwM2I1NmY0Zi5wbmciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9ODAwIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmltYWdlLm9wZXJhdGlvbnMiXX0.KggEaNOyaabmTWoBhwRRh_lfO_hJSvEkSsgMO8Fme8I[/img]

Don't skip drawing feet. They are important part of the flow.

The image finally loaded for me! Thanks for the advice

Here are some more 1 minute gestures, now with more feet.



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I try ..[img]https://scontent-vie1-1.xx.fbcdn.net/v/t1.0-9/59644128_441346843285297_7263190035732627456_n.jpg?_nc_cat=111&_nc_ht=scontent-vie1-1.xx&oh=d17ba3ab42809a1d6bcd68e841308297&oe=5D2BE6C4[/img]

I've still got a lot to learn myself so take this with a grain of salt, but I feel like you're doing a bit too much construction in these. Too many balls and cylinders. You're also going back over your lines a lot. Gesture is more about finding the rhythm or "flow" of the pose. Try lowering the time-per-pose down to 1 minute to help you loosen up and more quickly identify the important lines.

Okay :) Thank you very much

Some 2 minute gestures

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