Critic on 5 minutes animal drawings

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  • #28636
    Hi there

    I've been working on improving my animal drawings for some time now, and I feel kinda stuck without any feedback. Would you critic those 5 minutes drawing and tell me what I should improve ? I'm mainly trying to get the gesture / anatomy right
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    #28644
    for gesture, try going more stylistic if you want to, push yourself into exaggeration. for anatomy, try starting to use soft and hard shadows. and basic shapes, try including them more often, but i love your work with line weight!



    (unrelated but god i feel like i keep one telling abt shadows, there rlly important)
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    #28681
    Here I feel that your dominance on animal anatomy is great, and I feel that you should take a step forward with exagerating the gestures (if that is what you're aiming to) and start by adding shadows by now. Great work.
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