Critique about energy in figure drawing

Hi there,

I have been studying figure drawing for few months with a big focus about energy through drawings (actually a better way to talk about stiff figure...)

Anyway, may one of you critique my 3 minutes drawings ?

Thank you very much

https://www.instagram.com/p/DMnjq3AIPaBAtt2jkIn64QvG4v4FuOV7wF10UI0/?img_index=1&igsh=MXI2eXF5cGZsaDFxdA==

Good: you find rather clean and abstracted outlines for the features of the figure.
To improve: Try to distance yourself a bit from the outlines and to indicate the simple 3-D building blocks, those outlines belong to, a bit more.

Also, I think your measurement of proportions is still a bit shaky (these hands look rather small, for example), but that is something that improves automatically during practice.

@aunt herbert, thank you very much for these advises.

I have been focusing on outlines only in order to avoid stiff figures. So, I will work now on 3D representation right now and check stiffiness latter.

Thank you again