Hello good morning.
In my opinion, it gives me the feeling that you start with the head, then shoulders... everything in very detail.
What is usually done is to start with the line of action and explain it. Then make the basic parts like head, rib cage and waist. When you internalize it little by little, the detail comes out on its own.
Good luck and keep up the good work, it shows that you like it and you make an effort just by looking at your work.
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