Done as part of a 30 minute class.
Good placement of figures on the page, but what the heck is going on with the figure on the bottom? Are those two circles her rib cage? Her breasts? In any case, the perspective is wrong in relation to the rest of the figure. You wouldn't see that much of the circle that's furthest away from you.
A. M. Schaer
The bottom one is a person holding their arm out in front of their chest with their back arched slightly backward as they look up. This is from a side view, so you wouldn't see both parts of the chest and the arm that is infront of the chest is hidden behind the body while the forearm and hand comes out infront to be visible. The arm was just quickly gestured in since these were done within one minute each, so no detail really could be emphasized there. Hopefully after explanation, it could be more clear as to what the bottom figure is now. I'll work on making it more clear with short gestures in the future.
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