August 3rd

by Brilicol, August 18th 2022 © 2022 Brilicol

10 minutes; 25 minutes.
gel pen

Fern3553

The variation of line weight is really nice but your colors seems slightly muddled

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Brilicol

Thank you for taking the time to critique! I can understand that, I kind of just pick colors randomly/ as I feel, so makes sense! If you have any tips or recommendations that you think would help with that I'd appreciate it!

Fern3553

Im new to this so im not sure how valid this is, but I think that what threw me off here was your use of grey? I think also a consistent use of a color(s) for shadowing and lighting might also make it more cohesive!