30 sec gesture 12B

Nicer work on economizing your line mileage thru your figure relationships, so please do keep up the greater work even more. But however, in your skipping pose above, the leg assymetry doesn't seem to obvious enough to me. It needs to be feeling more like this model could and should be thinking of more joy in feeling. How would you like to do 15 more minutes of 30 second jumping and dancing sketches?

The reason why you would and should do this really tinier, littler request is because, it can and help make your dances feel even more dynamic, vital, and emerge in terms of lines or rhythm.(no pun intended) If you're completely curious about drawing dancing poses for action drawing purposes, please look into a Youtube video or two, plus get some Mike Mattesi books on Drawing Force for figures and animals. So, my hat's off to you, and let's hope this of what I have rubbed off on you.

These are great! I really love the energy in your lines , I really get a sense of movement in these poses! I think your preportions are fantastic, but for 30 second poses maybe try looking at the basic structures and their perspective. Especially for that third pose on the right. Like think about the circles and squares that make up the form rather than having to guess the outline.

Not sure if that makes sense, but I hope it helps. your works looking really good! Keep it up!