15 oct 2023 (5 min)

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Love your use of color for showing light and shade. Love the face and the right hand. It's really detailed. Try to find what you want to improve on. If it is the use of color, you could use three colors, one for light area's (so also the lines), one for dark (also the lines) and one for the general gesture (could also be in light pencil), but just for like the stickfigure. This way you can really immerse yourself in the color in 5 minute poses.