Gesture drawing critique

The drawings were only 30s, I'd like some feedback on how they look

https://www.dropbox.com/s/bqdopgtxt69bpqv/20160209_163539.jpg?dl=0

https://www.dropbox.com/s/zpmhgvvt6290blh/20160209_163551.jpg?dl=0

Hi Nerilla!

Those gestures look really good to me! I don't have a whole lot to add at this time. :) If you keep on practicing and use these gestures as a base, I'd love to see your 60 or 90 second gestures in the future!

thank you very much ^_^

I would agree with Nerilla. Try some longer and longer poses. Actually you could also try the 30 minute class session. Things get more interesting as you put more and more time into these.