Hey Kazzyschemes, your image is so small its hard to see anything. From what I can see you're not building on the line of action - I recommend you do some 30 second poses just taking down the line of action. Before putting pencil to paper think: What line would this pose best be represented as.
There's a great piece on laying out your underlying form on this site. It really helped with my dynamic! I've also found drawing circles where joints should be, really useful. You have real strength and conviction in your line which is awesome!!