Hour gesture session 2

Hello once again I am back, and hopefully improved. On my last post (https://line-of-action.com/forums/topic/hour-gesture-session/)

I was graciously given a very in depth critique that I really tried to take to heart. Tldr: get better at line confidence, so hopefully one can see if i've improved or not. I look forward to your feedback.

30 seconds: http://imgur.com/a/wmtom

2 min: http://imgur.com/a/HUDT8