i’m not very good at art- does anyone have criticisms of my drawings?

so i’ve just started learning gesture drawing after years of just goofing around w/o guides💔
does anyone have any constructive criticisms of these? i’d take anything!!


this one is attempts at gesture drawings over a few days (if you can see them clearly)

https://imgur.com/a/ZqihpGg

and this one was me tryint to make my own drawing based off the others, thouhg i couldn’t find a reference so i just winged it…

https://imgur.com/a/GyDDiBB


(please help)

if you just started out i would simply recommend to get some practice in. at this stage its very early to do a good guiding. you seem to understand the gesture so far. keep going till you hit some walls to improve further!

good job starting!