Messages du forum par Julian_00

To help mysef get a better understanding of form and anatomy, I'm delving more into structure practice. I would love to hear some critiques to see where I missed some parts.

https://imgur.com/a/ASUDr2W

Looks alright, but you really might want to work on your proportioning, looks wanky in a lot of places. Your getting the general gesture, which is good, but you still might want to work on the proper sizing of each gesture you do, even for 30 sec gestures. Also in some of them I noticed some etched lines in your gesture drawings meaning a lack of line confidence,but since your probably new at this that to be expected.

You might want to check out a video about gesture drawing from proko, it could really help you out.

Anyway though, keep at it!

• Julian_00 edited this post on January 20, 2022 7:11am.

Hey JMC, thanks for the reply,

I bought an anatomy book about a year ago so I mainly use that when refrencing anatomy, but I'll definitly download those apps, it'll help me more accuratly visualize the skeleton, and from there, where to attach mucsle.

As for the 'dark' comment, I think that due to me using a 2B pencil as opposed to a regular 2H sketch pencil. I definitly shoud practice my drawing pressue though.

I'm really trying to get a better understanding of back muscles
https://imgur.com/a/7i6oKdq
I would like some critiques, hopefully they don't look too mangled

I'm really tring to get a better understanding of back muscles

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https://imgur.com/gallery/Q2ZiPi7

Looking through these, there are some rushed ones that don't look as complete, and the general flow of some (i.e the softness/hardness of each gesture prepicated is not presented well), but I would still appretiate any critiques on what I have so far. I really want to improve my timing and planning on 30 sec gestures.