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April 17, 2023 10:24pm #29612
Hi!
your finished pieces are really good, I think you have a good sense of shading the body (especially the legs in the second picture) but I think that you should try some less static poses to really exhibit your shading talent. Even within the second pose, you are holding back a bit on how much you can enunciate the pose and really bring it to life. I'd also look into how shading clothes can differ from shading bodies cause they can be a bit difficult to differ but essential. Your faces seem very proportional and the shading is good on them, but the side profile on the second pic needs more of a forehead. Overall it's rlly good!!1September 17, 2022 9:36pm #28872Hey!
your figure drawings are very good, the only thing I'd say is that really utilize the fluidity that a line of motion can give you. I see that you sometimes will make it one or two lines, but this can sometimes give your drawings a slightly stockier feel. Your heads are a little big for the bodies, but the faces themselves are really really good. Animals look good as well! Your imagination drawings are good, but the heads are too big and it's screwing with the proportions, other than that the shading and stuff looks fine. Overall the progress in a year is really good!!1 1September 17, 2022 9:26pm #28871Hi!
I can't say much without a reference photo to compare with, but your proportions look pretty good! sometimes your arms look slightly too thin for the torso, but that's about it for the upper half. Legs and hips look good as well, I think those are the best parts of your drawings. I think the faces need a little bit of work but since these are figure drawings it doesn't really matter. Without a reference picture to go with the hands and feet I can't speculate too much, but I think some of the toes on the feet are slightly too short. The hands are amazing though!2 -
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