Messages du forum par Alumx

I think both are looking quite good! It kinda feels a bit stiff but I think its just matter of practice and getting familiar with the anatomy and volumes

But the form and shape is on spot

Haha! They look great :D

keep on practicing line that fluidity

Looking good! You have a pretty free and expressive line going on there

But something you should focus a bit is line economy, keep your pencil on paper for longer, let it slide over the volume of what you're drawing It'll improve your clarity a ton

Plus, avoid doing squigly and crosshatched shading, try shade in parallel lines, it'll look a lot cleaner and less visually cluttered



Now, another tip would be to control your pressure, I'm not sure which pencil you're using, but practice your hand and arm muscles to be able to control and transition between differrent pressure levels smoothly

This is a great exercise to train your pressure control



well, I think that's more than enough for you to work on!

Good luck dude, keep on working!