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while ur figure drawing looks interesting. it lacks understanding of basics/fundamentals of drawing. i will suggest u to work more on the fundamentals like line, shape, overlaps and line weight etc. also avoid using parallels to create more dynamism. study some static figure, focus on learning proportions and anatomy. work with the fundamentals and just learning anatomy for a month and attempt this drawing again. u will definitely see improvements. and to develop ur personal style lean into what u like while drawing.