
First class mode last 10'
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Megumin
Mhm, looks like a human. Well done! 👍 Only the face does not look female to me. It's a woman, isn't it? The left breast looks female to me. The right leg looks good. You might need some practice with arms. But you are far ahead of me!
Erneslacruz
You are welcome!!
Joaosjc
I liked the proportions and how you captured the nuance of shadows on key areas such as the right arm.
I see you tried to vary line pressure to bring attention to specific parts of the body. That is a good approach. But notice that where your line is heavier, it is also less control. I'd try to practice having more line control even when applying harder pressure, so your line get's more elegant.
Final note: I see how you tried to suggest the feet features. I think the right foot is way better than the right because you didn't try to represent each toe. In the other one, because you tried to propose the contour of each toe, it felt a bit off. Try to be more economic in the marks when you don't have the time or intend to focus on small details.
I see you tried to vary line pressure to bring attention to specific parts of the body. That is a good approach. But notice that where your line is heavier, it is also less control. I'd try to practice having more line control even when applying harder pressure, so your line get's more elegant.
Final note: I see how you tried to suggest the feet features. I think the right foot is way better than the right because you didn't try to represent each toe. In the other one, because you tried to propose the contour of each toe, it felt a bit off. Try to be more economic in the marks when you don't have the time or intend to focus on small details.
Erneslacruz
Thanks for your valuable comments!