First sketch
© 2018 Chuy10 minutes digital using Procreate. First of many. Critiques and comments welcome
Mathews (unregistered visitor)
Hi, Chuy!
This is a beautiful lady you drew up in there. I have some suggestions of adjustements you can make. One is working on your knowledge of the structure of the figure, by studying human anatomy or some simplified version of it, like a "mannikin" we see in many "How to Draw" books. I say that because her shoulder of the lifted arm seems too stretched upright, which makes her torso look wrong in proportion to her waist. Second and last, start paying attention to the quality of your line. Try to draw them continuously, without going back and forth, becuase it makes the lines look more like "hairs". Gesture drawing might help you with it. Congratulations on this piece and I hope I might have helped you!
Sincerely,
Mathews.
Polyvios Animations
Greatest work on your spatial reasoning to your nude female figure drawing. I love how very well define her lines of action are, in terms of her arms and legs. And more importantly, your broader lines for her head and expression.
Yet, this pose seems farthest too rigidest to me yet. Would you like to go ahead with 12 minutes of 2 minute poses? The reason why you could do these poses is, so that you could visually communicate your idea and energy the most strongest but powerful. For most details, look into 2 free PDFs of the Walt Stanchfield animation books.
Our hat's off to you.
I'm jealous, do you have a next gen ipad or ipad pro? :3 anyway here's what came to my mind looking over your pose. Hope it helps!
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