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your proportions are good! but you are murdering that paper with how hard you press down on it you need to work on your line quality your lines are not flowing and very jaged stiff and you press to hard. imagine you want to draw something on this figure drawing after if you want to erase these lines they would be engraved into the paper. also we want to keep 1 thing in mind all times that our line is there to show volume and not 2d things. with a hard outline it does not matter what you put on there it will always be flat bcs the darkest value is on the outline. but i like this figure good job also include time so its easy to know what to take in mind