Rays of Memory

by Jcmlfineart, September 13th 2021 © 2021 Jcmlfineart
Aunt Herbert

I love the over-the-top coloration.

Diana Coto

I love your vibrant colors and emotion :)

I do notice that his left eye proportion and position is off. It seems a little too small and not shaped at a roughly right angle form to show that it's a 3/4 view.


M. Diana,

You are mostly right about the eye. But in this model, his eye's over the lid on that side is just that extra bit slooped, and smaller naturally.

Maybe I know too much. Sometimes knowing your models can change how you draw them, versus coming in cold to the season. I think that may have stumped me a bit.

Thanks for the critique.

All the best,

JCML Fine Art

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