Just a quick sketch....
you are focusing to much on the curves and out line of the figure. first build the construction of your drawng. such as the proportions. for exsample your legs look dislocated.
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Blackmail3000
you are focusing to much on the curves and out line of the figure. first build the construction of your drawng. such as the proportions. for exsample your legs look dislocated.