Practice
© 2021 Orangepeel64A couple of 5 min poses and a 10 min pose. Any pointers to how they could be improved would be gratefully accepted.
Polyvios Animations
Congratulations, Orangepeel64, congrats on your loose poses. Greatest job, indeed.
My biggest problem is that some of the lines in the middle is a bit too itchiest and scratchy to me. Would you please be a bit more loosest with your lines, by being even more boldest with your edges, by going for a 10 minute session of 2 minute poses, emphasizing the movement, contour and shapes? (5 drawn poses)
The reason why you could and should do this suggestion is because, to make your lines the least itchiest and the most boldest and smoothest. Plus, or course, to make your poses the least stiffest and the most free-est, expressive, and alive.
Good luck to you and our recent goal.
Orangepeel64
Thanks for the great feedback I will take that onboard and try to implement that in my future drawings.
Orangepeel64
Thanks for the great feedback I will take that onboard and try to implement that in my future drawings.
Arm in the middle doesn't quite look right, the feet look great, but the torso int he middle looks off centre. Left and right bodies look great though
Yes the middle was a bit of a disaster, the left hand as you are looking should have been touching the leg, I lost the composition and it was too late to correct. Thanks for the feedback.
Yes the middle was a bit of a disaster, the left hand as you are looking should have been touching the leg, I lost the composition and it was too late to correct. Thanks for the feedback.