More time,different media

by Naima, February 10th 2023 © 2023 Naima

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form

Polyvios Animations

Hello and good evening, Naima, and welcome aboard again. Greater job on your lines of action and rhythm in your nude clothed pose. Greater job on your lights and shades, too.

I could use some more dynamism of the graphic shapes or lines or spaces. Please free up your lively drawings with those things to keep in mind. Because if you do this suggestion, then your shapes of lights and shadows will have really true vitality and energy in those things to bear in your mind.(In addition to your current goal to balance your edges, spaces, and relationships, plus gestalt) For most info, please consult a copy of Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain by Betty Edwards, also available in a free PDF in archive.org.

Good luck to you and your great learning curve.