Dove sbaglio ?!

by Vaniaa, January 1st 2026 © 2026 Vaniaa
Viggo S
This looks so good I genuinely had a hard time coming up with constructive criticism. The only thing I can think to say is maybe practice adding some muscle to the torso, just to make the physique more consistent.
mystiqxe.
Okayy!! I love that you have clearly done the POV, as well as the slight anatomy details for the head. Will be useful later when you sketch the overall layout^^

However, the proportions are off for the arms, and the neck(slightly). What I do suggest is try to study proportions for the arms, especially if you want to make them anatomically correct. 
An example here is that the biceps on the left arm should be slightly fatter, as when your arm is bent, your biceps contract, becoming bigger.
Moreover, your left arm is thinner than the right! Take care to notice such details. If you're struggling as to how to make it even, do check out pictures to observe/sketch similar to the pose you've drawn, and focus mainly on the shoulder, collarbone, and arms areas. Hope this helped!^^
Elias Hp
Vas por buen camino para capturar las proporciones humanas, pero trata que las líneas iniciales estén mas sueltas y rígidas, no siempre tiene que ser anatomicamente correcto ni proporcionalmente correcto, intenta capturar mas esa sensación de movimiento con líneas básicas , eso pulira mas tu capacidad de detallar extremidades:)

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