![](https://lineofaction.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/7843/conversions/art-36641-1549872540-extralarge.jpg?X-Amz-Content-Sha256=UNSIGNED-PAYLOAD&X-Amz-Algorithm=AWS4-HMAC-SHA256&X-Amz-Credential=AKIAIZE2523KZPI73CMQ%2F20240630%2Fus-west-2%2Fs3%2Faws4_request&X-Amz-Date=20240630T095010Z&X-Amz-SignedHeaders=host&X-Amz-Expires=1800&X-Amz-Signature=f3411416e7071cdb8d2a2f098f75ff0d9dff90c05f3feda26b0b188ad55f8147)
02-10-2019
© 2019 leofelco816It's face month! Trying to improve on facial rendering and expression. The 5 min and 10 min are my favorites.
leofelco816
Thank You, Saburton33. I tried to darken the tones on the 10 min submission on 02-12-2019. Hope you see improvement. I appreciate your critique.
Leo
Ms Talkin
Great exercise! The drawings where the eyebrows/eye lids/eye openings are clearly related with connecting lines, details, or repeated shapes are the most expressive. The ones where eyelid detail is missing or there is not a clear connection or relation between the brow and eye opening seem flatter and less expressive.
leofelco816
Thank You, Ms Talkin. I'm working on my eye rendering and expressions. It is a challenge within the 30 sec and 1 min timeframes. I want to show more control during those time constraints. Your critique is appreciated.
I love your expression drawings, I think they capture the essence of the expression well. Only things are the line behind the ear of the 10 minute drawing is a little dark which is slightly distracting, and maybe you could start to use more values and shade the dark and mid tones to create more form and depth, otherwise I think they are looking great!