30-Second Loose, Gutsy and Gestural Basset Hound Sketch

Done as part of a practice session with poses of 30 seconds in length. My current goal is: Improve my light touch to all my animals. My light touch is something to be had fun with. What do you think? Should I lighten up my touches more, or am I all set? Polyvios Animations P.S. I'm saving money by working with my childhood crayons.