Thank you for taking the time to critique! I can understand that, I kind of just pick colors randomly/ as I feel, so makes sense! If you have any tips or recommendations that you think would help with that I'd appreciate it!
Im new to this so im not sure how valid this is, but I think that what threw me off here was your use of grey? I think also a consistent use of a color(s) for shadowing and lighting might also make it more cohesive!
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