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I really think you did a good job on general placement, but I believe you need to work on useing curved lines and not straght line, because eventually your figures will become more human like in sense? Idk tell me if that makes sense.

Good morning Knaussart, comrade, and welcome to our website, and how are you doing this morning? Fine, and you?? Say, nice work on showing off and displaying your range of fluidity and flow of your forces of your pose above, but the flow is not forceful enough yet, but your forms and spaces are not too defined enough yet either, so how would you love to go for our interactive drawing tutorial by clicking on the "Learn" button. The reason why is because it's normally for the newest members of Line of Action, from beginners to the burnt-out masters who desparately need a refresher course. If your goal is to free up your range of forces, bring it on.

My hat's off to you and your great marches of progress and learning curves.