Looking for more feedback

I've been practicing gesture daily since the last time I posted (about 2 weeks ago). Any advice is appreciated :)

I wrote how long I took for the poses on the relative page: https://imgur.com/a/sLJ7KGv

Hi Johnny!
Nice to see you again, I would like to begin with a small tip, for the photos try to look for a better spot because with the color of the pencil plus the light you can barely see the gesture drawings.

I would suggest trying and practice form and balance.
When developing a gesture drawing, it is important to be aware that you are describing the eight parts of the body

- Head - Pelvis
- Spine - Ribcage
- Arms - Legs

The essential elements you will describe using these eight parts include a sense of story and composition. Giving the pose a '' Sense of story '' means communicating a unique sense of positioning or attitude. Every person has a specific way of holding himself or herself when moving.
By exaggerating the ''Story,'' you give your viewer a compelling image to experience. When creating a gesture drawing, this involves developing your figures proportions and giving your figure a sense of balance and weight.


Keep practicing Johnny! you doing good!