these ones feel a little sloppy to me, they're my first drawings of the day. Kind of a warmup, really. I focused on the shapes of each form, I'd really like to add a lot more weight to each form, if anyone has any tips to enhance my work i'd really like feedback :) even if it isn't much, a little goes a long way!
You did well capturing the gesture and the entire pose of each figure. And your lines look good, it even loos like you emphasized certain lines to define the structure more, so good job. What I would say you could improve on is the volume of each shape you are defining; some shapes could be a bit bigger, or more volume-us if that makes sense. Other than that, good job; keep it up!