Hello Yamikumo!
The 1 minute gesture drawings are really good! They portray the movement of the model, and the different weights of the lines help to portray this.
Something I'd maybe look at is the proportions of the figures, for example, when looking at the figure on the bottom left the legs are too long to fit with the torso and the arms.
Overall though these are really nice! Well done on the foreshortening on the top left figure, and the loose lines help to keep the sketches from feeling stiff. Definitely keep it up!
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