(sorry for my bad english)Well it is good,but you are looking for critique,then :
-this sword isn t straight, and that at the end too, there are waves and there shouldn t be waves :D
-shield hasn`t a good shadow (right not enough rosa)
-hooks ..i don t like them,they are shapeless
-at some parts the shadow isn `t corect :)
-at right corner is a monster much bigger as the orther monsters,it dosn`t look good :)
But for first it`s veryyyy gooooooood :)
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