Forum posts by Jian Phoenix

here's my 1 hour practice please give me some constructive feedback

https://imgur.com/a/KOUQE1u

Some notes:

thanks for the responses last time they helped me out a lot. These past 2 week I've been more focused on 30sec and 1min poses I've been trying to dial it back a bit on detail and I've been trying to get more fluid lines. Even though in some poses I still have scratchy lines but I'm more conscious on the lines I make and I'm trying to fix them

I've been having trouble with my proportions lately so any help on that would be nice

I'm not a complete beginner but this is my first time posting and I would appreciate some honest and thorough feedback

https://imgur.com/a/S1b8Y1g

Some notes:
I sometimes get the feeling that my 30 secs and 1 mins are too detailed but I also can't get into drawing one line for each for limb

The 10 min pose was complicated for me so I did a lot of erasing and made it muddy

I'm having trouble with legs so any advice would be great (you can tell in my 25 min one