17-Second Figure Pose in Foreshortening, Running

Done as part of a practice session with poses of 17 seconds in length. My current goal is: Improve my figure drawing forces, gestures, acting, actions, thoughts and feelings, most quickly. Here's my newest goal.(see above) I'm really getting into, like Kim Jung Gi, where I draw foreshortened poses, while the rough guidelines are in my head. So what do you think? I feel like it could-a been better for my animations, drawn.