Good afternoon, kef. Welcome to LOA again. I'm Polyvios, how do you do? Great job on your show of lines of action, rhythm and the motion of the attitudes. Way to go, and keep up the good work.
However, I'm still not really enough of the rhythm and tempo of the poses here. How would you like to loosen up your line styles with 30 minutes of 2 minute pose drawings? As a result, your storytelling poses and attitudes will become less stiff and more dynamic, energetic, and more into the character's thoughts and internal emotions. For more details, be sure to look into the Sakuga Booru's Will Finn page. It has this animator's scenes and more.
However, I'm still not really enough of the rhythm and tempo of the poses here. How would you like to loosen up your line styles with 30 minutes of 2 minute pose drawings? As a result, your storytelling poses and attitudes will become less stiff and more dynamic, energetic, and more into the character's thoughts and internal emotions. For more details, be sure to look into the Sakuga Booru's Will Finn page. It has this animator's scenes and more.
Good luck to you, and your learning curve.