i want some advice on my water color

my eng is poor sorr, but i still want some advice for my water color.
thats the first time i try some water color:)
http://elizabethlulujazz.deviantart.com/art/one-practice-395602039?ga_submit_new=10%253A1377370602

Great work for your first time :) . I would say that if you should focus on the gradient of the dark to light as a high concern for water painting.

another thing you could look into would be Colour theory, great way to give emotion through the colours to give more life to your art. :D

good luck with it.

thank you chris breen